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She shouldn't be living her life alone...
« Thread Started on Aug 24, 2006, 5:07am »

I'm not posting it yet cause I haven't finished it yet...but here is a preview to what I have.

DJ sank back into his arms. DJ was ready...just nervous. Soon they were having sex as quiet as possible so no one in the house could hear.

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She heard footsteps come up the stairs...they were heavy footsteps. "Dad!? Dad is that you!?"DJ yelled in confusion. Her Dad usually doesn't get up this early. "Dad!?"She yelled again...again no answer. Then the bathroom door opened. She couldn't see anything. A maroon colored curtain was all she saw. Then...suddenly...very fastly...the curtain was forced open. She saw the deformed people that were always in her dream. She let out a loud scream..hoping that someone would hear her. The deformed people..all toppled onto her..they started raping her.

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DJ and Kimmy went running outside after they heard a huge crash. DJ saw smoke and she knew something bad had just happened.

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"...your just a little pregnant."Kimmy told her.

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"Hey I've got an idea. Go somewhere where your Dad won't know where you are...and refuse to go home until he agrees."Kimmy told them.

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"Tell her I want her home. Plus I changed my mind about the baby...I set her up an appointment for an abortion. She's too young for that responsibility."Danny said.

Steve had anger flowing through is pumping veins.

Well thats all I got so far. I'm up to Chapter 13..but I have much much much more to write. I'll try to write more as soon as I can but I'm starting school again on September 5th.

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Re: She shouldn't be living her life alone...
« Reply #1 on Sept 3, 2006, 9:35pm »

Ok I'll do what I did with my last story. I'll put up the story and continue it everyday. So here is Chapter 1. I'm also posting exactly what I wrote.

Here comes another horror story created by me. This time...DJ and Steve get into something before DJ's High School Graduation. Danny finds out and bans DJ from ever seeing Steve again. DJ who decides to live her life with things she wants to do...decides to run away from home and go on a trip with Steve, Kimmy, and Kimmy's boyfriend Kevin. They get lost in a hot climate located in the mountains while on their way to a relaxing hotel in Arizona. What they don't know..is there were unsolved murders in those mountains. The murderous things in the mountains......are still there and hungry for human flesh.

This story is based on a couple hit movies...can you identify them?

Rated R for:Sexuality, language, drug use, and horror. Read only if your comfortable with it.

Ages:
Danny Tanner:38
Jesse Katsopolis:33
Joey Gladstone:35
Rebbecca Donaldson:30
DJ Tanner:18
Stephanie Tanner:13
Michelle Tanner:8
Nicky+Alex Katsopolis:3
Kimmy Gibbler:18
Steve Hale:20
Kevin Renham:19

She Shouldn't Be Living Her Life Alone

Chapter 1
Their first time.
DJ Tanner, an 18 year old teenager...was in her bedroom sitting alone. Everyone in her house was in dream land...except for DJ. Even when she does sleep..she is in a terrible nightmare..an unexplainable one. Its the same every night...tonight she told her boyfriend Steve to come over and spend the night. He hadn't arrived yet...well atleast she thought he didn't.

Suddenly there wan a noise at her window...someone threw a rock at it. She got up and walked over to her window. On the ground she saw the love of her life, Steve Hale.

She put her finger up signaling that she would be right there. She slipped on her slippers and walked downstairs into the living room. She opened the front door and Steve was there.

"Hi babe."Steve whispered quietly. They shared a long passionate kiss.

They ended their kiss and DJ stared into his beautiful eyes. "I was afraid you weren't coming."She said.

"I'm here."Steve said simply. Then they snuck up into DJ's bedroom and locked the door. They sat down on DJ's bed and held each other. "So what do we do now?"

DJ had planed the whole thing...they would just sit there and talk. But now that he was there...she wanted to do more. She wanted to take a big step in their relationship. She leaned in and gave him a kiss. They started making out and Steve tried getting DJ's clothes off. DJ started feeling uncomfortable and pushed away.

"Whats wrong?"Steve asked.

"I'm just nervous. I've never done this before."She admitted.

"Neither have I. Just relax."Steve said trying to relax DJ.

DJ sank back into his arms. DJ was ready...just nervous. Soon they having sex as quiet as possible so no one in the house could here. DJ moaned quite a bit and so did Steve but that was it. They stopped and layed next to each other. DJ felt so in control. She realized that this was her life...her decisions. She knew what her life was based on now.

After a bit DJ dozed off to sleep. She didn't bother try to give a fight...she was too tired. She had totally forgot about her nightmare. Soon she started dreaming...she saw blood everywhere, she heard screams come from one ear and out the other. But most of all...she saw deformed people. Not monsters but..people. The middle of their mouth cutting through flesh and connecting to their nose. They all had lazy eyes and they were filthy...cuts on themselves...stains of blood on their clothes. DJ started twiching...she was so scared. Soon she jumped up and out of her dream. Steve was sitting next to her holding her. He was trying to sooth her..he must of heard her.

"Hey Deej you ok? You were scaring the [Censored] out of me."Steve said in worry. DJ looked around...she was safe in her room. She looked at the window and it was dark out.

"Yeah I'm fine...I just had another bad dream."DJ replied back. She saw Steve dressed in his clothes. "Where are you going?"DJ asked...she didn't want him to leave.

"I'm going to get going now. Its five in the morning. I don't want your Dad to find me here."Steve told her. He kissed her and then left. DJ's feeling of protection was now gone.

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Re: She shouldn't be living her life alone...
« Reply #2 on Sept 10, 2006, 12:43am »

I'll post the next chapter as soon as I can have some comments.

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Re: She shouldn't be living her life alone...
« Reply #3 on Sept 17, 2006, 12:46am »

Ok I'll just post the next chapter..

Chapter 2
Morning shower.
She spent a whole hour in her room just sitting down and trying to get her dream together. But the more she thought of it...the harder it got. When her alarm clock hit 6:00 she got up and put her robe on. She grabbed some clothes and her graduation outfit and walked into the hallway. She opened the hallway closet and took out a towel. She closed the closet door and walked into the bathroom. She turned on the water so it wasn't too hot or too cold. She took her robe off and stepped into the shower.

Her shower was fine. She felt something wet go down her legs. She thought it was just water. So she closed her eyes. But it wasn't water...it was her period blood. She was ovulating...she just didn't know...until she opened her eyes and looked at the water. It was red...blood red. She touched her hand and pulled her hand away. She looked at her hand and blood was on it. She had gotten scared...what if she was pregnant!? Her Dad would kill her. She then turned off the shower.

She thought that was her only worry..until she heard footsteps come up the stairs...they were heavy footsteps. "Dad!? Dad is that you!?"DJ yelled in confusion. Her Dad usually doesn't get up this early. "Dad!?"She yelled again...again no answer. Then the bathroom door opened. She couldn't see anything. A maroon colored curtain was all she saw. Then...suddenly...vey fastly...the curtain was forced open. She saw the deformed people that were always in her dream. She let out a loud scream..hoping that someone would hear her. The deformed people..all toppled onto her..they started raping her.

"DJ! DJ wake up honey! DJ!"Her father yelled. DJ jumped up. She was laying in her bed. Her dad held her in worry. DJ was still shaky from the dream she had. She must of fell asleep after Steve left. "Honey are you ok? You were screaming."Her father, Danny Tanner, said. He sounded very worried...DJ always seemed to wake up in her caring father's arms.

"Yeah Dad I'm fine..I just had another bad dream."DJ assured him.

"Are you sure thats it? I heard you moaning quite a bit last night. Did you have a stomach ache?"

'Oh my god..he heard me and Steve moaning.'

"Yeah..but I feel better now."DJ got up and went to take a shower. She was graduating High School today.

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Re: She shouldn't be living her life alone...
« Reply #4 on Sept 18, 2006, 12:14am »

Sorry I haven't had a lot of time to read this. I appreciate the time you take in doing this.

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Re: She shouldn't be living her life alone...
« Reply #5 on Sept 30, 2006, 1:55am »

I have the worst news ever...I was about to post the next chapter but my asshole brother went and deleted a lot of stuff including all my work on this story. I barely remember what I had written. I feel so bad about this but I'm gonna have to close this. I'm sorry to everyone that was reading this. :-/

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Re: She shouldn't be living her life alone...
« Reply #6 on Sept 30, 2006, 5:37am »

I'm sorry to hear that, HFF. At least you'll have your previous stories here for reference. Good luck with anything you come up with.

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